◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- first solution is writing fiver papers ________ 빈 칸 부분의 단어들을 더 정확하게 발음해주세요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- she was invited to award ceremony
-> she has to go to an award ceremony
- writing five papers
-> but he needed to study chemistry
- first of all, she can finish it
-> first of all, she can finish the paper
- if she want to choose second solution
-> if she chooses the second solution
- she will make her parent disappoint
-> her parents will be disappointed
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 구조가 잘 잡혀있습니다.
- 주요 포인트가 언급되어있습니다. 제시하신 이유가 적절하고 설명이 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- 문법에 조금 더 신경을 써주세요.
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