◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 굉장히 monotonous합니다. 조금 더 톤을 살려주시고 자신감 있는 목소리로 크게 말씀해주시면 좋을 것 같아요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- time pass very quickly
-> time passes very quickly
- it motivate my imagination
-> 어색한 표현입니다.
- it make me happy
-> it makes me happy
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 구조가 잘 잡혀있지 않습니다. 우선 첫 번째 이유가 it is enjoyable인데 두 번째 이유에 대한 설명으로 또 it is enjoyable이라고 하셨어요.
- There are two reasons for this. First of all, the main story lines are very cool and enjoyable. Time passes very quickly when I watch these kinds of movies. Secondly, fantasy movies helps me to be more creative. To be specific, ... These are the reasons why I like fantasy movies the most.
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