◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 발음은 전체적으로 좋으신 것 같아요. 끊김도 이전 녹음에 비해 많이 없었어요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- it is good to health
-> it is good for health
- after playing sports in every weekend
-> after playing sports every weekend
- I have became very health
-> I have become very healthy / I became very healthy
- for these reason
-> for these reasons
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 전체적으로 설명도 잘 해주셨고 이유 선정도 좋았던 것 같아요. 문법에 더 신경써주세요.
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