◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- in detail 에서 톤 강세를 de- 에 둬주세요
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- baby started to cry when other babies cried since the noise of crying distracts babies the researchers supposed that the reason why they started to cry is because of the noise.
-> full stop 이 있다면 full stop 표현을 해주세요. A baby started to cry when other babies cried. The researchers supposed that the reason was because of the crying noises.
- possibility of feeling empathy for the baby
-> possibility of babies feeling empathy
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 마무리가 조금 아쉽습니다. 같은 의미의 phrase들 반복이 있습니다.
- 강의 요약이 잘 되어있습니다.
예상 점수: 29-30