◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- health 정확하게 발음해주세요
- hesitation 줄여주세요
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- I think all students to complete physical education class
→ I think that all students should take physical education class
- I have became very healthy
→ I have become very healthy / I became very healthy
- with classmate
→ with classmates
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 설득력있게 잘 설명하신 것 같아요. 특히 본인의 경험담을 예시로 사용하셔서 더 좋았던 것 같습니다. 이유 두 가지 모두 질문과 잘 맞는 대답이었고요. 수고하셨습니다.
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