◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- a strategy that animals use their part with bright color to escape from predators
-> a strategy that animals use to escape from predators. It involves the use of body parts of bright colors.
- which has colorful spot in it
-> which has colorful spots on it
- which has some shiny part in their wing to reflect the sunshine.
-> which has wings that have shiny parts to reflect the sunshine
if the butterfly threatened by a bird
-> if the butterfly is threatened by a bird
- two examples that clearly demonstrates
-> two examples that clearly demonstrate
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 전체적으로 요약이 정확하게 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- 목소리 톤이 낮아질 때 발음이 정확하게 안 들릴 수가 있습니다. 조금 더 큰 소리로 또박또박 이야기해주시면 좋을 것 같아요. 조금씩 hesitation도 있습니다, uhh..등이 반복되지 않게 꾸준히 스피킹 연습을 해주세요.
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