Q. The advice you can give to your friend who is trying to get a job.
If my friend is trying to get a job, I would say my friend to find a company with flexible working hours.
First of all, it increases efficiency.
For example, people are productive at different times, such as morning or night.
(Therefore? State your reasons)
Also, people can get personal business done. (Unclear point)
What I mean is that when I go to see a dentist in the morning, I can work in the afternoon.
(What does it indicate?)
For these reasons, I would say my friend to find a company with flexible working hours.
* The meaning of sentences are quite unclear.
And the contents seem not enough for 45 seconds record.
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10-17 |
Lack of clear reasons |