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◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- all the consequence is up to her
-> 의미를 잘 알 수 없는 어색한 표현입니다 - all이 붙었으므로 복수형으로 잡아주셔야 합니다, all the consequences are
- if she was hired
-> if she gets hired
- he might think all the result is up to his luck
-> he might think the result was as so because he was lucky
- he might blame on his bad luck
-> hi might blame it on his bad luck
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
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◆ Comments
- 전체적으로 [r] 발음에 조금 더 신경 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고 많으셨어요 :)
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