- already 발음이 부정확합니다. [r] 발음에 신경써주세요.
- recently 발음이 부정확합니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- the writer in the letter wants that students should be prohibited ..
→ the writer of the letter wants students to be prohibited ..
- before the class start
→ before the class starts / before the classes start
- which are recently built
→ which were recently built
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◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 요약이 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- 설명을 차근차근 잘 하셔서 좋았습니다. 조금 더 complex한 문장들을 많이 써주시면 더 좋을 것 같아요.
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