◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- According to the reading, the student suggested that broadcast schedules of university radio station be extended.
-> The reading suggests that the broadcast schedules of the university radio station should be extended.
- Most of significant information
-> Most significant information
- She also go online
-> She also goes online
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 요약이 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- 자잘한 문법 실수들이 아쉽습니다. 문법에 조금 더 신경써주세요.
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