◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- woman 에서 [w]발음을 정확하게 해주세요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- giving an example of TV company
-> giving an exmaple of TV companies / of a TV company
- worried about how prone to malfunction and breakdown of TV
-> worried about malfunctions
- use experienced sales people
-> hire experienced sales people
- to ensure the customers
-> to assure the customers
- the experienced sales person answer any questions
-> the experienced sales person can answer any questions
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 문법적인 오류때문에 설명이 조금 매끄럽지 못했던 것 같습니다. 구조를 잘 잡아서 설명을 해주시면 더 좋을 것 같아요.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 3