◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- I believe (?) that 에서 believe발음이 뭉쳐서 잘 들리지 않았습니다.
- far, if 에서 [f]발음을 정확하게 해주세요.
- 전체적으로 발음이 많이 아쉽습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- the first reason is this
-> the first reason is that
- you can get more muscles
-> you can strengthen your muscles / you can get more muscular
- muscles is very important for doing sports
-> muscles are very important to do sports
- most of famous sports player has strong muscles
-> most famous sports players have strong muscles
- if you working out in the gym every day
-> if you work out every day
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 두 번째 이유는 첫 번째 이유와 많이 비슷했던 것 같아요. 서로 다른 이유들을 선택해 설명해주세요.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 1