16year olds driving
◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- that's why there are tests 에서 복수 표현 확실히 해주세요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- when they are given such other responsibilities, it's unfair to say that they cannot drive because they're not responsible enough
-> since they are given such responsibilities, they should also be given the right to drive
- that's why there are test
-> that's why there are tests
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 첫 번째 이유에 대한 설명이 더 좋았을 수 있었을 것 같아요. 정리를 더 잘해주셨으면 좋았을 것 같습니다.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 4