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◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- tape recording발음을 더 정확하게 해주세요.
- play발음을 정확하게 해주세요. [l]발음 강하게 해주세요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- why researcher thinks that babies
-> why some researchers think that babies ... / why a few researchers think that / why this researcher ..
- talks about experiment
-> talks about an experiment based on this topic
- babies start to crying when other babies cry
-> babies started to cry when other babies cried
- the noise of crying
-> 어색한 표현입니다. the crying noise/the crying sounds가 더 자연스러울 것 같아요.
- when they heard the tape recording about other babies crying, they are also crying
-> when they heard the the tape recording of other babies crying, they also cried. / they also started to cry.
- played the baby's own crying
-> played the baby's own cry
- has something to do with their crying
-> has something to do with the crying / with their cries
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 설명을 잘 해주셔서 문법 실수/발음 및 톤 실수들이 더 아쉽습니다.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 2