◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- smart phone 발음 정확하게 해주세요.
- rebellious 발음 정확하게 해주세요.
- disregard 발음 정확하게 해주세요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- there's a two reasons for this
-> there are two reasons for this
- tend to focus not well
-> tend to not focus well
- they are easily distract in class
-> they are easily distracted in class
- such as chatting with each other
-> such as 를 빼고, they tend to chat with each other ... 이렇게 해주셔야 합니다.
- playing on one another
-> playing with one another
- those day
-> around these ages
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 두 번째 이유 설명에 쓰셨던 시간이 상대적으로 더 짧았던 것 같아요.
- rebellious한 것과 tend to be easily distracted이 비슷하게 느껴질 수 도 있을 것 같습니다.
- rebellious와 premature와 관계가 강하지 않은 것 같습니다.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 2