◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 전체적으로 톤이 부자연스럽습니다.
- hesitation이 많습니다
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- the woman's problem is she has roommate who makes a big mess
→ the woman's problem is that her roommate always makes a big mess
- First, she ask her to taking cleaning room together
→ First is asking her to clean the room together
- ask service center to
→ ask the service center to
- social skill
→ social skills
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 문장들이 많이 심플합니다. 응용할 수 있는 몇 가지 절/문장 형식을 외우시는 것을 추천해요. 예를 들어 By ~ing, she will be able to ~
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