◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- opinion 에서 [p]발음이 [f]발음에 더 가깝습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- hires a famous singers
-> hires a famous singer
- a lot of customer
-> a lot of customers
- eating the chicken
-> eating chicken
- pay attention for only
-> pay attention to only
- he do not like
-> he does not like
- it would lead to drop in profit
-> it would lead to a drop in profits
a lot of customers가 두 번 들어가 있는 문장에서는 대명사 they를 사용해 반복을 피해주세요.
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 전체적으로 요약이 잘 되어있습니다. 조금 더 complex한 문장들을 쓰는 것은 연습해주세요.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 3