11. Talk about an experience in your life that made you feel embarrassed. Describe it and say why it was embarrassing.
◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- experience 발음이 부정확합니다. 네이버 영어 사전에 정확한 발음을 확인해주세요!
- 'had to read' 에서 'read' 발음이 부정확합니다. 발음을 더 길게 끌어주세요.
- would에서 [w]발음에 더 신경써주세요
- 문장이 끝날때만 내림톤을 해주세요. 예를 들어 the experience in my life that made me feel embarrassed is a presentation in university class / when I was in freshman.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- the experience in my life that made me feel embarrassed is a presentation in university class when I was in freshman.
→ the experience in my life that made feel embarrassed is when I made a presentation for one of my courses at university during my freshman year.
- about topic
→ about a given topic
- informations
→ information
- Professor said powerpoint is not enough at all
→ My professor said to me that the powerpoint was not good enough
- as students would have that my presentation is strange
→ as students would have thought that my presentation is strange
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 선택하신 경험이 주제와 잘 맞고 설명도 잘 되어있습니다.
- 그런데 마지막 문장에서 Professor said powerpoint is not enough at all as students would have thought that my presentation is strange ... 이 부분은 내용이 어수선합니다.
- 마지막에 So I was very embarrassed .. 이런식으로 주제와 다시 한번 연결을 해주시는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다.
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