15. Talk about a time when you experienced success. Describe the experience and say why it was a success for you.
◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- let me 에서 let의 [l] 발음이 약합니다. [l]발음을 강조해주세요
- 발음은 전체적으로 좋으신 편이에요, 뭉게지지 않게만 노력해주시면 될 것 같아요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- 자잘한 문법 실수들이 있습니다.
- hoody and jeans
→ hoodies and jeans
- the reason I like the most is it is comfortable
→ the reason why I like wearing the most is because they are comfortable
- I'm student
→ I'm a student
- my leg is always swollen
→ my legs are always swollen
- that is the reason hoody and jeans is my favorite clothes
→ that is the reason why hoodies ane jeans are my favorite type of clothes
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 최대한 45초를 다 써주세요. 현재 27초로 매우 짧습니다.
- 왜 후드와 청바지가 좋은지에 대해 또 다른 이유를 제시해주셔서 시간은 채우시면 될 것 같아요.
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