◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- responsible, relationship [r]발음을 정확하게 해주세요.
- they can ___ they have something to do although they don't like *이 문장의 전체적인 톤이 어색합니다.
- it's a ___ idea of the responsibility
빈칸 단어들은 발음이 부정확해 잘 들리지 않습니다.
- chores에서 입모양을 O로 해주세요.
*발음에 신경 써주세요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- helping chores make them responsible
-> helping with chores makes them responsible
- teach the responsibility to the children
-> teach the children how to be responsible
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 이유 선정이 좋습니다. 이유를 뒷받침해줄 예시를 들어주세요.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 2