◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- procrastinated (?) 발음을 더 정확하게 해주세요.
- different에서 [f]발음이 [p]발음에 더 가깝습니다.
- provide, various에서 [v]발음이 부정확합니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- he was in hard time
-> he was having a hard time
- provide the place to meet a lot of students
-> provide the place for students to socialize
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 제시하신 첫 번째 이유에서 so he thinks it would be a good chance for students to adjust well to school life 등 주제와 연결해주는 문장을 추가해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
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