14. Talk about an interesting tourist attraction you have been to. Describe it and say why it was interesting.
◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- city, eastern, french 발음 더 정확하게 해주세요
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- Montreal is city located in eastern Canada
→ Montreal is a city located in eastern Canada
- I felt there is two unique features
→ There are two unique features
- even though Canada use English most
→ even though English is used the most in Canada
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- language 부분은 'historical feature'로 레이블링하셨는데, 둘이 관련이 없는 것 같습니다. First feature is the language used in this area. 이렇게 하시는 것이 더 자연스러울 것 같아요.
- 두 번째 이유 'landscape'에 대한 설명이 더 필요해보입니다.
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