What is the most important decision when you were a young child? Why?
◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- I could make a lot of friends there
→ I made a lot of friends there가 더 자연스러울 것 같습니다.
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 구조가 좋고 제시하신 이유 두 가지 모두 적절합니다.
- 설명또한 매끄럽게 잘 되어있습니다. 다만, 'I could make a lot of friends there', 'I could learn Japanese'에서 'could'보다 'I was able to learn Japanese', 'I made a lot of friends there'식이 더 나을 것 같아요.
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