◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- from 에서 [f]발음 정확하게 해주세요
- wealth 발음이 부정확합니다. [th]발음에 신경써주세요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- there's a two reasons for this
-> there are two reasons for this
- I'd like to talk about interesting styles in my country is black colored clothing
-> One of the most interesting styles in my country is black colored clothing
- the kind of clothes.
-> such kinds of clothes.
- exposed to be others
-> exposed to others
- it has superstition. Many of Korean people
-> is related to a superstition. Many Korean people ...
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- black clothing과 privacy가 어떻게 서로 연관되어있는지 설명이 부족합니다.
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