2. Do you agree with the following statement? As people get older, their personalites change. Use details and examples to explain your answer.
I agree with the statement that as people get older, their personalities change.
First, environmental change affects people's personalities.
For example, when people make their own families and start having have babies, they experience big changes in their life. So they are likely to adjust to their new surroundings by modifying their personalities.
--> How they modify their personalities? Explain it
Second, people get matured through much experience as they become older. To be specific, people encounter many people throughout their lives. This experiences allow them to develop many elments like patience which helps them to deal with relationships well.
For these reasons, I agree with the statement that as people get older, their charcaters become different.
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