◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다. 발음에서 큰 실수는 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- the biology that I studied when I was a high school student
-> Biology which is a subject I studied when I was a high school student
- I was excited to learning about our body creature
-> I was excited to learn about our body
- it is realistic so that I can easily understand ...
-> it is realistic so I can easily understand
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 구조가 잘 잡혀있습니다.
- 제시하신 이유가 모두 적절하고 설명이 구체적으로 그리고 논리적으로 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- 발음도 좋고 설명도 잘 해주셨는데 major 문법 실수가 많습니다. 문법에 조금 더 신경 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
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