◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- University of history department? department이 맞다면 발음을 더욱 명확하게 해주세요.
- 아주 조금만 더 빨리 말씀하셔도 될 것 같습니다.
- policy에서 [-cy] 발음 더 정확하게 해주세요. 알파벳 [c] 발음은, '씨앗'의 '씨' 발음과 다릅니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- the university of history department
→ the university's history department
- he says that the studying in groups
→ he says that studying in groups
- studying method varies from individual to individual
→ study methods vary depending on the individual/student
- there are lots of people who is very busy
→ there are lots of people who are very busy
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 요약이 잘 되어있습니다.
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