Which one do you prefer, keeping busy schedule to do something or having a lot of free time.
◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- I can keep my healthy life
→ I can keep a healthy life
- I can sleep enough
→ I can get enough sleep
- I like having a lot of free time for me
→ I like having a lot of free time.
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 제시하신 이유가 모두 적절하고 설명이 잘 되어있습니다.
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