◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- According to the reading, ... according to the letter.
-> 같은 문장이 according to the로 시작하고 끝나고 있습니다.
- people will not concentrate on it
-> people will not concentrate on them (artworks)
- In details,
-> In detail,
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 구조가 좋고 요약이 잘 되어있습니다.
예상 점수: 29-30