◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- professor 에서 [p] 발음이 [f] 발음으로 들리고 있습니다.
- can 발음 너무 강조하시면 can't로 들리니 주의해주세요.
- asks 발음이 어색합니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- children who are play hide and seek
-> children who are playing hide and seek
- just cover them by blankets
-> just cover themselves by blankets
- they think that because they can't see other children so other children can't see them
-> they think that because they can't see other children, other children can't see them as well (they think랑 other children ~ 부분이랑 연결이 된다고 생각하시면 됩니다)
- Second example is a child answering phone
-> second example is about a child answering a phone call
- then the children just nods
-> then the children just nod
- the childs think that she can see him so nodding is just enough
-> they (이전 문장에서 children으로 쓰셔서 그대로 이어가줘야 합니다) think that their mums can see them that's why they think nodding is enough
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 구조도 잘 잡혀있고 강의에 대한 이해가 좋습니다. 설명도 잘 해주셨는데 몇 가지 문법 실수들이 많이 아쉽네요.
- just 표현을 많이 쓰시는 것 같습니다.
◆ Comments
- 전체적으로 문법에 신경써주셔야 할 것 같습니다.
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