◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- quickly 발음을 더 정확하게 해주세요
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- a lot of students prefer to use in the morning
-> a lot of students prefer to use the gym in the morning
- they have class and part time job
-> they have classes and part time jobs
- it will be crowd in the morning
-> it will be crowded in the morning
- financial problem in long term
-> financial problems in the long term
- the equipment will be quickly wear out
-> the equipment will quickly wear out
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 요약이 잘 되어있습니다
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