◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- concentration에서 [n] 발음이 잘 들리지 않습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- I had lots of wooden blocks with lots of kind of shape, size and colors
-> I had lots of wooden blocks of different shape
- what I usually do with the blocks was
-> what I usually did with the blocks was
- even it would fall down I kept trying
-> even though it was difficult to stack them, I kept trying
- I could had more creative mind
-> I could have a more creative mind
- and etc
-> and so on.
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 전체적으로 구조가 잘 잡혀있습니다.
- 제시하신 이유가 적절하고 설명이 매우 잘 되어있습니다. 예시들이 모두 적절했던 것 같습니다.
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