- recently 발음이 부정확합니다.
- classical 발음이 부정확합니다
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- it release my stress
-> it helps to release my stress / it releases my stress
- they get better physical fitness
-> they can improve their physical fitness
- several pieces of Mozart. Its melodies are very soft so it helps me ..
-> several pieces by Mozart. The melodies are very soft so they help me ..
- other sound
-> other sounds
- the sound speak loudly next to me
-> the sounds of people speaking loudly around me
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◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 제시하신 이유가 모두 적절하고 설명이 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
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