◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- ceremony 강세를 mo-부분에 두시고 계십니다. ce-부분, 앞부분에 들어가야 합니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- will change graduation ceremony into two parts
-> will divide the graduation ceremony into two parts
- it is true that the number of students increase
-> it is true that the number of students have increased
- to reduce the number of speech
-> to reduce the number of speeches
- The woman then mentions that there are too many people in the hall so it can be solved by decreasing the number of guests
-> the woman then mentions that the problem of having too many people in the hall can be solved by decreasing the number of guests
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 잘 요약해주셨습니다.
- 내용을 조금 더 잘 정리해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
- there are too many people in the hall은 woman이 mention한 것이 아닙니다. 이런 부분들 조금 조심해주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
◆ Comments
- 누가 어떤 fact를 말했는지 확실하게 전달해주세요.
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