2. Some students prefer to study in the morning. Others prefer to study at night. Which method of studying do you prefer and why?
I prefer studying at night rather than in the morning.
First, during the night, it is very quiet. To be specific, most people sleep or take rests calmly at night. So there is not much noise made in the surroundings. The quiet environment helps me focus on studying better.
Second, studying at night fits with my lifestyle. To be specific, I am more active at night and I sleep very late. So it's more efficient for me to study something at night. If I study in the morning, I might not be able to study properly.
For these reasons, I like studying at night more.
Comments: 첫번째 이유는 설명이 잘 되어있으나 두번째 이유는 설명이 조금 부족한 것 같습니다. being more active at night이랑 공부를 efficient하게 할 수 있는 것, 이 둘의 연결고리를 잘 설명해주시면 좋겠어요. 그래야지 왜 아침에는 제대로 공부가 안된다는 것인지 조금 더 이해를 할 수 있을 것 같습니다.