◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- my parents are really good cook so that their food is very delicious
-> my parents are really good cooks so the food they make is very delicious
- other person
-> other people
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 떡볶이가 뭔지 영어로 description이 필요합니다. ex) I miss the Korean spicy rice cakes, 떡볶이, ..
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