A
time when I didn’t want to do something was when I had to participate in a
speech competition in Chinese.
First,
I was bad at Chinese in that time since it was time when I first came to Chinese
school. To be specific, it was speech competition which students should make a
speech about ‘thanks’ and everyone in the school should be participating in.
Teachers also required us to memorize all the speeches, and it was impossible
for me to memorize the minutes of speech that consists of unknown languages.
Second,
I was busy for other works for those days. For example, I had so much homework
to do and so many things to clean in our house because it was just when we
moved our house.(의미없음) Since our home has had some problems for few former days, I
would have to delay our moving day, and the day was just when we should ready
for the speech.
For these reasons, I didn’t want to participate in the speech competition.
이게 두 번째 스피킹 입니다. 제가 외국에 거주하고 있어서 내용이 좀..ㅎ
감사합니다ㅠㅜ
채점기준표 | 점수 | 첨삭 |
Fluency | - | 채점불가 |
Grammar | 2 | time 이 너무 반복됩니다 the minutes of speech that consists of unknown languages. 말이 되지 않습니다. |
Contents & Ideas | 3 |
- 문제가 뭔지 모르겠지만 아이디어가 너무 한정되어 있는 것 같습니다 |
Perfection | 2 | - 문장 자체가 너무 어색합니다 |
Score | 10-15 | limited ideas+ awkward sentences |