The most memorable experience that I have had in a restaurant is having a when I had my birthday party there.
First, I was celebrated by many employees from my company came to the restaurant to celebrate in the restaurant. To be specific, they prepared a special birthday party for me in the form of singing a song and taking pictures and sang me songs and took many pictures of me. It was very impressive a very memorable experience to me because I never expected that kind of party in the at a restaurant.
Second, the restaurant gave me special presents for birthday. To be specific, I received some free foods like cake or and cookies and even some discount coupons. Thanks to the careful consideration of the restaurant, I was able to have a great time there.
For these reasons, having a celebrating my 21st (몇번째 생일) birthday party is the best experience that I have had at a restaurant.
문법 실수가 꽤 많습니다.
- 사람을 celebrate한다고 표현할 수 없습니다. celebrate는 행사와 함께 쓰여서, I was celebrated by라고 쓰시면 비문이 돼요. My birth was celebrated by로 해주셔야 합니다.
- in the form of 표현은 정확한 뜻과 예문을 봐주세요.
- very impressive to me 는 강한 인상을 남기다로 해석이 되지 않습니다. impressive는 훌룡하다에 더 잘 쓰여요. it left me a great impression으로 써주시거나, it was a memorable event for me 표현을 써주세요.