2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? Teaching in an elementary school is easier than teaching in a university. Use specific reasons and details in your response.
I do not agree with the statement that teaching in an elementary school is easier than teaching in a university.
First, children are hard to control. To be specific, the nature of children is that they do not have the ability to regulate control themselves. So children are not likely to follow necessary rules in class, which requires more attention and effort to teach things in an elementary school.
Second, elementary teachers must take care of mental aspect of children children's mental health. To be specific, children are in the stage of both physical and mental growths growing mentally and physically. So when teaching in a elementary school, teachers should be careful not to have a negative impact on children's mental growth. As a result, there are much more things to consider for elementary teachers.
For these reasons, I think that teaching in an elementary school is more difficult than teaching in a university.
- 구조가 잘 잡혀있습니다.
- 주제에 잘 맞춰서 대답하시려고 노력하신 것 같아요.
- 그러나 두번째 이유는 조금 애매합니다. mental growth가 정확히 무엇을 의미하는지 예시를 통해 설명을 해주셔야 할 것 같아요. mental 대신에 social skills위주로 하는게 어떨까요?