◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- library 발음이 부정확합니다. [b]발음이 [v]에 더 가깝게 들리고 있습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- the man is having hard time
-> the man is having a hard time
- the workers of the library is making
-> the workers at the library are making
- go to cafe
-> go to a cafe
- go to supervisor
-> go to the supervisor
- if he choose the option number 1
-> if he chooses the option number 1
- so just go and talk to the supervisor will be much easier
-> so just going to the supervisor will be much easier
- and who knows he can listen and really make up the change
-> and who knows, he might listen to him
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 문제점, 해결책 요약이 잘 되어있습니다. 제시하신 이유가 적절하고 설명이 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- 문법 실수가 많습니다. 기초 문법에서의 실수가 반복되면 큰 감점 요소가 됩니다.
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