◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- environment 발음이 부정확합니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- Reading passage is giving us information about
-> The reading passage is about
- which is the physical features of the animals has been changed when...
-> which is the change of physical features of animals when
- they classified in very different field
-> they are classified differently
- and also it applies to the same way to the second ones
-> Secondly, he gives an example about seals and penguins
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 구조가 잘 잡혀있습니다. 예시 설명이 20초가 되어서야 나오는 것 같아요. 앞에 용어 설명 부분을 조금 더 짧게 해주시면 좋겠습니다.
◆ Comments
- 전체적으로 흐름이 많이 끊기는 것 같아요. 더 자연스럽게 스피킹을 해주시면 좋겠습니다. 말씀하시는 속도를 높여주세요.
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