◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- rather [r] 발음이 부정확합니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- take courses on online
-> take courses online
- because I'm a people person. I like people a lot.
-> because I'm a sociable person. I like interacting with people a lot.
- interacting students ... and get an information from them
-> interacting with students ... and getting information from them
- whenever I have question
-> whenever I have a question
- get an immediate answers
-> get immediate answers
- if I take online
-> if I take an online course
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 제시하신 이유가 모두 적절하고 설명이 매우 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- [r] 발음 연습을 꾸준히 해주세요.
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