◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 문장 중간중간에 break가 조금 긴 것 같아요. 최대한 자연스럽게 문장에 있는 phrase들을 연결 시켜 주세요.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- it is not needed for light and window to be replaced
→ there is no need to replace the lights and the windows
- that is peace and quiet
→ that is peaceful and quiet
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- hesitation을 조금 줄여주세요
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