◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- The news in the past that made me the happiest was when I was getting my first smartphone
-> The news in the past that made me the happiest was when I heard that I was getting my first smartphone
- I knew that smartphone was very educational using online dictionaries, also many useful applications ..
-> I knew that smartphone was very educational as it had online dictionaries and also many useful applications ..
- microsoft and powerpoint
-> microsoft word and microsoft powerpoint
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 제시하신 이유가 모두 적절합니다.
- 설명이 구체적으로 잘 되어있습니다.
◆ Comments
- 전체적으로 흐름이 굉장히 좋은 것 같아요. 페이스가 굉장히 안정적입니다.
- 이제는 꾸준히 연습만 해주시면 될 것 같아요.
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