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Second, by playing sports people can enhance their skills to control their emotions 대충 이렇게 쓰고 그뒤로
학생들은 입시공부밖에 안하는데, playing sports함으로써
life lessons such as how to relax their moods or how to spend their free time effectively 이런것들을 배울수있다.
그리고 그들이 어른이되고 복잡한 실생활문제들을 접했을 때, these skills enable them to control their pace and solve problems without being exhausted
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