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The extended family is less important now than in the past
Opinions might be divided over whether the extended family is less important now than in the past. People from different walks of life may take different stances on this issue. Personally I disagree with the given statement, and there are two reasons that could validate my position.
The first reason is that the extended family helps to improve your relationship with others. While watching movies or playing a soccer with your family, you can share the same excitement and pleasure. After the activities, you can relive the experience together while talking about the most memorable moment. These activities will strengthen bonds with your friends or coworker, and provide opportunities to make new friends. Let me take my experience as an example. Before going to elementary school, I was very reserved and did not have many friends. Then on the first day of school. Our family moved to grand father's house. My grandfather and other family members are very funny and witty, and popular with our family. He especially liked to watch a comedy movie, and often invitied me to the cinema.
We spent quality time together while laughing out loud at hilarious scene and impersonating characters in them. As a result, our family membership grew stronger, then I became much more sociable and outgoing in the elementary school.
Group activities, especially amusing ones, is a great way to relieve stress and cheer me up. People are often tied up with busy schedules and overwhelemd enormous tasks both at work and school. While watching dramas or making a food with your big family they can take a mental break the burdens lifted from their shoulders. Take my case as an example. I make it a rule go to a movie theater with my family including my grandfaterh after completing tasks such as taking an exam or submitting term paper. Captivating plots in thrillers and special effects in action movies are always pleasant distractions from stress. Comedy movies make our family laugh our head off all the way through. As a result, we are recharged and get ready to face the next day.
All in all, above the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe that the extended family is still important now.