The speaker objects to the points in the reading passage made about a portrait of a teenage girl that a member of Austin family kept. The professor states that the points mentioned in the passage have flaws.
First, the writer argues that the family members who allowed the portrait to be used as an illustration considered the girl in the picture as Jane Austin, which means that the figure is Jane. Mean while the speaker rebuts this saying that the period that the picture was utilized as the illustration was about seventy years after Jane Austin's death, which means that family members never met her. Thus, the family's endorsement that the girl in the picture is teenage Jane Austin can not be convincing proof.
Second, the author states that the resemblance between the figure in the sketch drawn by Jane's sister and this portrait can tell that the girl in the portrait is without a doubt Jane. However, the professor argues against this. he stressed that there were numerous members in Austin family, which means that the girls in that family had high likelihoods of having similar appearance to that of Jane Austin. On top of that, many of the Jane's cousins or children of her relatives were teenagers in the relative period. Moreover, some experts believe that the girl in the portrait was one of the Jane Austin's nieces.
Third, the writer asserts that the style of the portrait is similar to that the Ozias Humphry, a portrait painter, who used to be employed by Austin family. Thus, the girl in the picture must be Jane. On the other hand, professor presents another convincing proof, the stamp on the campus of the picture. When the campus was sold was written on it and according to the written date, the campus was sold when Jane Austin was twenty seven years old, not when she was a teenager
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