1. In England, the extension of the middle class during the past twenty
years has happened on such a scale as to make the old classification of
society into capitalists and proletarians almost obsoletely.
-여기서 틀린 부분 은...obsoletely인데...형용사 형태로 고쳐주어야 맞는거 같은데... 얼핏보기엔 동사나오고 전치사 나와서 맞는거 같은데...이부분 설명좀 부탁합니다....^^~
2. One young man consented to having his body frozen and placed in a
massive capsule in order to preserve it before doctors find a cure for his
disease.
-여기서 틀른 부분은 bofore라 하는데..어떻게 고쳐야 옳바른 건가염..!?!?!?;;