1. I needed to discuss about the topic of my paper or at least consult with
my teacher before making a decision.
- discuss about이 틀렸다는데..아....모르겠습니다..왜 틀렸는지..윽..너무 어려워요...
2. If you are at all dissatisfied with the computer, your money will be
refunded and paid back to you upon request.
- 여기서는 refunded and paid back이 틀렸데요...아...왜요?!? 흑..
3. The reason thousands of young people come to live in L.A every year is because L.A. offers the chance to realize ambitions in nearly every sphere, whether in the arts or in business.
-여기서는 틀린 부분이 because인데...어떻게 고쳐야 옳바른게 되나요..!?ㅜㅜ