1. Florence Nightingale's family thought it better that she get married and
live a quiet and comfortable life rather than enter the profession of nursing,
which at the time considered disreputable.
-여기 서 틀른 부분은...considered라는데.. 어떻게 고쳐야 옳바른 건가여...윽..?!?
2. Imagine a world whether the mobile phone is miniaturized into visual invisibility, insinuated into your clothing, and required only a minute amount of power, which can be generated by your own body's reactions.
-여기서는 required가 틀렸다는데...휴..왜 틀린건지..요...?!?!?
3. While many of these persons have produced fine papers and essays, only a few stand out in my mind as to be especially talented and industrious.
-여기에는 to be가 틀렸다는데..어떻게 고쳐야 하나요..?!?!?!